Trailer - First Draft

This is my media trailer. It is the first draft so I'm looking to improve it. I don't think the music matches with the genre and I have spoken with my lecturer and she said that I should change the music and add another two scenes as the storyline is a little confusing. I understand that the storyline is confusing as it only shows Sean eating at a breakfast table and him beating someone up. I wanted to include a scene where he bumps into two people and they look at him in disgust, this will show his detachment from society. And another scene where he is trying to fight a teenager over a bridge. This could build up the tension for the trailer and anticipation of the fight scenes and deaths.

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